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  1. Unread #1 - Jul 26, 2010 at 4:48 PM
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    i don't really like it myself.
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  3. Unread #2 - Jul 26, 2010 at 6:17 PM
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    You're getting better.

    However, there are very big concepts that you are missing out on:
    Lighting, first off. There isn't really any lighting source and it looks as if the stuff on the lower right corner is where the light is coming from, which it isn't. One tip a higher-end GFX artist told me was to consider light from the beginning.

    Your signature also lacks flow. It had potential but the hair and the weird thing behind him fucked it up.

    Color is really bad. I'd suggest not working from a black background unless you plan to fill it up.

    Also, the text is really bad. Text should never be completely plain. It makes it look really unprofessional. Make it fit in with the signature. Add some color too it.

    I don't like the border, either

    You're getting better though.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jul 27, 2010 at 9:51 AM
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    Border. Rid of it.

    Idk seems like the colours, lighting, depth, text and everything are off. You've done better.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Jul 28, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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    honestly i like ur work. but seriously i hate the low quality looks
     
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