Another piece of work by me.

This is another one written by me, wrote it about a week ago or so, a few days after the funeral of my best friend's brother.
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"The Tragedy of Time"

In wasted years,
of fabled youth,
we find our fears,
are lost to the truth,

in childish lies,
belief is gone,
with clouded eyes,
it's all so wrong,

we believed in love,
and gods of light,
no one above,
for what do we fight,

the dark is cold,
within we cry,
in growing old,
we seek to die,

before the world,
has lost all magic,
inside we curl,
the end is tragic.

 

Amazing I mean.. WOW! It's really beautifull!

 

Not to sound totally gay,

but thats the most beautiful thing I've ever heard.

Sorry to hear about your best friends bro.

 

Wow man really nice poem, your poems reach out to people and speak to the public, really nice job I must say.

 

Holy shit that was a great poem.

 

that would have to be one of the best poems i have heard.. well ever... i would love to know if you could write some lyrics that i could maybe use for a bit of fun.. personal use... if you will write me some pm me or email me.. [email protected]