An Awesome Drop I Found On Net

guys i found this on the net,

it was on a page for the veteran rappers on the site apperently but this guy was a noob on the site.

LEAVE COMMENTS AND ILL TELL THE GUY WHAT YOU THINK!

what a stupid idea is this a thread only for the best vets? (veterans, people get confused)
everybody gettin big headed thinkin they the next akala or ghetts?
i reckon behind the keyboards a trash talkin pussy, im willin to place bets
prefer to talk trash over the net to avoid gettin carried away in a cas - ket
but i dont care if anythin jst do what ya like
just promise me one thing m8 please just drop the mic
anyway if you lot reckon u as hard as your saying you all are
i imagine soon enough ull be living behind a door thats barred
everyday in ya cell gettin analy raped n mentally scarred
closest your ever gonna be to happiness is 15 mins in the exercise yard
eatin porridge everyday made up of about 80% lard
soon enough in the showers ya gonna look down n ull be hard
but then again i guess you lot been like that from the start
u in this biz for respect n cash you lot aint in with ya heart
ive blown this whole scheme completley apart
pickin up the broken pieces n takin em away in a body cart
along with the worn out mem-or-ies
of each fake ass m-c
thinkin they can fuck wit me
just cos im the new- b
why u gotta take it all so serious-ly
everybody here thinking they the next big pun
forgettin sum people are here for fuckin fun
just remember man some people like to dream small
cos when people dream to big they fail and get stuck at a brick wall
only built ya self up and only gave ya self further back down to fall.
so just be nicer next time pickin on noobies again ill just get em to gimmie a call
all they do is beckon n i dont care what ya reckon for a brother ill there in a flash of secon
fed up of all these vets thinking its ok with noobs to be messing...
you started at the same place even if you dont feel ike confessin
bet when you lot started you where fucking nothing unique
just lurking around these forums like a game of online hide n seek
bet each n everyone one of ya rhymes where weak
so away from ya keyboard n stop pickin on the feeble n meak.

 

pretty basic, Ive seen better
+ its never good to hit a vet especially since most vets are pretty well known underground (Ex. Immortal Techs cousin is pretty well known at a few rapper websites and ive met him in real life a few times hes pretty dope)

 

Any rap/poetry/lyric has its impact taken away when bad grammar, bad spelling and chatspeak are used.