Freestyle I Just Thought Of...

Before you read, I am listening to Like a Star by Taio Cruz, so that will explain the lyrics and the overall flow...

My mind fumbling for words to describe her,
All I can think about is her black hair flowin' beside her,
Whenever I look her in the eyes my heart burns,
Brighter than the glimmering sun,
And hotter than the gun,
That shoots bullets made of her smile,
When I realize she's not mine it's makes it ever so more hostile,
She's all I need, what can I say she's my star,
My heart cries to her let's take our,
Selves and go far,
Somewhere so bizarre,
You can fix my scars,
You can take lift me up higher than Mars,
We can make this ours',
All you have to do is say yes,
Give me a chance to express,
What I've been trying to suppress,
I swear to you our love will never regress,
I'll always be there when you're in distress,
All I need to do is confess...

What do you guys think? If you listen to the song, it will most likely sound better... The ending leaves you thinking lol.

 

I love Taio Cruz songs, they're amaze

 

fuck jesus

DEVIL NYKKARS!

 

thats ridiculous, mad props to you bro.

 

It's ok a bit emoish.

 

Thanks.

I get what you mean, but that wasn't my aim... Just clearing out any confusion.