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Discussion in 'Showcase Archives' started by Kristian4th, Jun 4, 2010.

  1. Kristian4th

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    I didn't notice the edges until I uploaded it sorry, try to disregard them
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    What even is it supposed to be? Its hyper glammed up, and filled up bubbles and weird effects. Just looks kinda immature.
    Nice stock I geuss
     
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    TO be honest it looks like you just threw random shit in there, try and coordinate it more.
     
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    The little zig zag bolts and other stuff need to be cleaned up a bit, then you've got a decent start. Fix up those edges, work on lighting and effects.
     
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    lightning bolts and stars are too obvious
     
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