Falco - Another new sig

Is that supposed to be text? I can barely see the render.

Over-whored with brushes/c4d's a shitload.

3/10 not trying to be mean but...

 

You can barely see the render?
Lol'd.

 

how much do you charge to make me a sig?

EDIT: User has been infracted for this post.

 

Ask any real graphics artist opinion, this sig is over-whored and suckish, gonna act like you know your stuff ill stop being nice.

Your sig sucks,all you did was take a LQ (low quality since im assuming you dont know what it means) make it bigger, and it looks like you had a seizure on your computer with brushes, its called a tutorial, read some. Think you know your shit? Graphics battle? I need a good warm-up.

 

All I said was if you can 'barely see the render', you need some fucking glasses.
Now stop being a cocky prick. kthx.

 

Im a cocky prick? haha, i try and give you advice and you "lol"

Battle please? For the hell of it, i need something to do.

 

The signature is okay, but the render is rather hard to see amongst all those brush effects. It generally makes the image more appealing.

Text is nice, but you could've made it slightly easier to read.

Effects and all are nice too, but as I said before, next time try not to overdo it and make it so the render is clearer.

Overall 6.5/10

 

You, sir, need to learn to take criticism. Posting your work here pretty much means people are going to make comments and give criticism. You either post it and put up with negative comments or you don't post it at all. Furthermore, I agree that the render is not as visible as it should be. The focal of a piece should actually be the focal.

 

What you said is much different from "I can barely see the render". All I was saying is that you can clearly point out the render. Being less visible than it should be is a much better way to put it.

 

Seajae, I think I know your works from another forum... not sure though. I think I have seen similar works. I like it all except the words (white text) can not easily be read. Did you make it so it would be like that on purpose?

 

Chill guys, no need to get too worked up over it.

Quite average looking. Sorry to say it, but it's a bit all over the place and could be a lot nicer with some work. Effects add no sense of direction for the image, and are just a big mess from my perspective.

Make that text a little larger, or just remove it. I think the hardest thing about graphics design in general is getting text to suit the work itself and finding the best place to put it. Better leave text out if you're really looking to improve.

Colours are a bit bland, give them some more vibrance.

Lastly, the render isn't very visible, which is what Lukeff was trying to say I believe. I think it's generally a bad idea to use the eraser tool for blending under any circumstance, because it is usually overdone and makes the render/stock stand out even more from the background than beforehand.

Keep working at it and you'll get there

 

I do agree with luke, it's over-whored with brushes and everything. I think you may have attempted for a 'grungy' style? And the render looks really low quality. I suggest you look at some tutorials, and please don't be mad at what other users say. If you read the stickies, they say you should listen to artist's advice and become better from it. If you just ignore it, you might not even get anywhere.

 

Why flaming over "can barely see the render", it's true, it's too blurred or bad quality.

-Sharpen Focal.
-Remove some brushes/C4d layers.
-Change Font.

 

I can barely see the render or read the text. It just doesn't seem right to me. Work on fixing the focal, calm down with the C4D's and make your text stand out, but not the point were it creates a second focal.

 

everything has been said.
Too much brush/c4d
Monotone
LQ stock
ugly text