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Its a little big but its very,very sexy. Not sure if you meant to but the dept is really really good too.

 

Too light around the entire signature (unless you wanted it like that? Then ignore the rest of my post). Try adding a consistent source of light (or two, or three). This is sort of what I mean (I haven't done photoshop in a while, and I don't have the PSD, so I'm sure you could do much better):



Just experiment with lighting effects, maybe look at these if you're bored:
http://cloudbrush.com/?p=37

 

I love the concept. The only thing I don't like is the brightness. Tone it down a bit, and you should be set.

 

Yeah, the brightness kinda kills the colours IMO
Stuff on the far right just detracts from the chick tbh

OTHERWISE JADOR!

 

lol alex.

ya ill make a v2 and change the lighting.

 

This'll sound like a broken record... but yea, brightness. Tone it down squidgey Depth is a bit off.... sharpening and blurring of the FG and BG could be improved- It's a but unrealistic in places, sections of the girl shouldn't be so sharp if she's as far back as she is (thinking about a realistic composition...)

To be quite honest, I really fuckin' love your work...

 

I actually needed that. It's only just clicked that the depth and composition of the girl is really fucked.

Yeah ill post a v2 in a min.

 

brightness is slightly too high, add contrast though.

Flow confusing.

Depth good.

Decent, not ur best doe <3

tell me when you get o