Poem's i wrote in 8th grade

" Everything "

You went on your final vacation,
Driving around the nation,
Trying to find a civil location.
A place where you can stay and get out all of your frustartion.
A place with no cummunication,
Or alot of sensation. You've got that determination,
To find a spot and begin you relaxtion.

" You "

You used to be so nice,
You used to be so pretty.
You've changed for the worse,
And now you just look pity,
Girls have come and gone,
And you're certainly not the one.
I've made up my mind,
And you're just not my kind,
of girl.​

 

I like "Everything" the best, well come

 

Yes I like Everything too. Nice job. Keep writing!

 

Your poem is great for the age you wrote it at Keep writing and good luck!