School task

Sooo i found this experimental thing i did a while back, we have a school art task involving the mix of art with urban culture. I kinda modified what i did to fit the urban feel, it's really still a WIP even tho i wont be finishing it, the wires forming the pulse are too stiff imo.

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It looks pretty dope. I think you're absolutely right about the pulse, too stiff.

 

Yeah looks like i might edit that, gonna be a pain but it'd look heaps cleaner.

 

The overall placement and shape of the pulse looks much better, you did a good job accomplishing an urban feel to the piece nice job.

 

Much better

 

Tone down the texture just a wince and it will look better

 

It looks nice, like Moonglare said the texture is a bit much

 

foken poop m8

Nah, just kiddin.
It looks awesome, just that the wires are litttttle off

 

@ayy if you mean the cable with birds going up slightely then that was on purpose since bending it straight made the wire look bad.

 

looks kinda ominous, but i like it!