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    Untitled - Last poem for now

    This is my first poem I ever thought of. This is the last poem I will post for now.

    I sit alone and cry at night,
    As the next day I know we'll fight.
    I lose my temper and yell at you,
    How long will we last only you knew.

    Every night I leave not knowing of my return,
    I walk in the door as you stand very stern.
    You ask me where I was all day,
    I lied, couldn't tell you where I stay.

    Five years later and no more lies,
    Now we sit and stare to the sky.
    Never alone, no not anymore,
    I say I love you, at a high roar.

    After all we've been through,
    I played my cards right, so we screw.
    Nine months later I hear the good news.
    You had a baby girl, and I know whose.
     
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    its ok for a first poem but theres no flow
     
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    Thanks. It is one of a few I put together for people in school that asked me to do them.
     
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