Does this run smooth?

I had to write a short thing for my communications class on how I feel on something related to my degree.(Political Science) and here is what I wrote. I honestly do not care on your political views I just want to make sure it runs smooth to you guys.

I love how people now have to go and get a Permit to exercise their right of Freedom of Speech. Now here is the kicker you also have to go to a location that is called a "Free Speech Buffer Zone" which is a location that the Politicos on Capitol Hill get to choose for you. What's next is the Government going to put protesters in a bubble to silence them too? Do Americans not have the right to peacefully and respectfully assemble where ever they want and on their own time? The Government says it is for their own safety of the protesters. I do not know about what you think about Government in your life, but I say get the hell out of mine. We do not always need your protection.