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    you all know what to do... CnC away!
     
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    same old stuff boring and plain...get som e effects into it ffs
     
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    oh yes, how i'm going to improve from that post.

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    but hey, it's not like i c4d whore now is it :p
     
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    This minimalistic style wasn't pulled off properly this time, TDD. Try using either a render that better suits where you want the light to come from, or a light source that better suits your render. Also consider eliminating head-room next time. (The empty space above the head. It's actually preferable to slightly chop a piece of the head off, if it's not pivotal to the render's focus.)
     
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    it's basical one. I like the colours tho. add a frame and bit mroe effects and it will look way better ;)
     
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    i know the name .Pulse from somewhere
     
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    Too basic, not enough going on there. Too bland and needs some depth. 6/10
     
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    Looks really good.. only thing i think would look better is a 2px border on the top and bottom.. nice though 9/10
     
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    I think that since you are awsome with lighting, you need to work on depth, look at some of Durial's work they are great examples, of flow.:cool:
     
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    thanks guys, esspecially SMI, i love your cnc :)
     
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    I dunno why. But I like it, a lot. I'd give it a 8/10 apart from the lighting.
     
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    i really like that, 9/10, but the lighting should be coming from bottom left hand side shouldn't it? but yeah, i really like that, good work
     
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    bit flat to me.
    BG lacks.
    would like to see some effects
     
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    Its, nice good flow/blending you could definitely improve perhaps on the left side light color/intensity..
     
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    My CnC would be to lose the text.
    Text makes it fugly. Without the text I'd call that a somewhat hot sig.
    Now that I look at it more though, Durial is right; it's flat. Throw some depth into it, it'd look so sexy.
     
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