Cracked

[Harry]

Just something I did, beginner at C4D hopefully its ok, let me know how i can improve.

Cheers
I will also take any ideas, or if someone wants me to make them something

 

Hi Harry! Nice piece of art you have there. Your C4D renders/stocks are pretty LQ. I would recommend using higher quality material to compose your pieces.

 

[bigk1121]

i thank the inside of the c an the e should be transparent so you can see the moon/planet. and the black part on the sideof the k

 

[theArc]

Looks good but like Moonglare said, the effects are pretty low quality.

 

[ZippyGFX]

The actual cracking of the text needs to be more defined IMO. As already mentioned try using higher quality C4D renders, I have plenty if you want some. The outer glow doesn't fit with the dark atmosphere of the text so I suggest adding in dark shadowing instead. Little more emphasis on the lighting wouldn't hurt either. Seeing lots of improvement in your work, keep it up.

 

[Harry]

Okay zippy, Where can get some of your C4D renders? And thanks for all the advice

 

[ZippyGFX]

Ill pm you a pack I made when I get home from school

 

[Harry]

okay thanks bro

 

[Luffy]

It looks okay, the above graphical artists have mentioned a lot, I'm not a graphical artist but as a regular person I'd say you need to work more getting the name Cracked into there, bringing out the definition of it in the image