SOTW Entry - Topic: "Suspended"

So I realized that I needed to make an entry, so I threw this together pretty quickly and it looks a little rushed.


V2


As usual, Cnc is much appreciated ^_^

 

the depth is perfect IMO. I like it but, i dont like that ribbon thing across her arm i think it would look better if it went under her arm.

 

It was part of the stock unfortunately - I couldn't agree more with you about that, but every time I tried to edit it out, it just looked wrong
Thanks for the feedback!

 

Posted a new version - managed to fix the ribbon on her arm somewhat.

 

The ribbon thing's actually a wonderful factor for the depth, it splits into foreground and background shit, causing dani to jizz himself.

Focal point is the pixelated 1px line, which isn't good.

Remove and sharpen her hairy face

you're getting too good jordan

 

Dude solid style and the depth is incredible the way you presented the atmosphere is unreal as well, it would have been better if it wasn't as shadowed on the left side in my opinion but other then that I have been diggin your recent works alot!

 

I really love the atmosphere and depth, give it a sharpen if that doesn't ruin the quality too much. Shit's good bro. Maybe improve the colours a bit too. This is one of my favourites from you!

 

Thanks for the feedback guys!
I posted a New Version Did a little sharpening in some areas - over the face wasn't very easy unfortunately, it messed up when sharpened and looked low quality. Boosted the contrast and colours a little, and removed the 1px line

 

I think the depth and flow are pretty good, I don't mind the ribbon, I do not think it makes the signature look any worse.
However it does look like you got your focal wrong to be honest by putting it infront of her face, but maybe you have done that on purpose, I do not know..
It is a pretty nice piece really.
Actually maybe you could have added a little more to the negative space on the right hand side, it just looks a little too empty maybe if some low opacity or dull effects were added.