The line.. MY EYES!
Okay, here's the thing: Make things look more organic.
Don't know what organic is?
This is an example.
Now, the colours and the font simply curses with the colour scheme Sythe is using, the flare in the O looks kindof akward and the text under it isn't that nice to look at, it makes me want to look away..
I'll sum something up for you to work on:
1) Make the text look nicer and more subtle: You do not want it to look pointy and plain! (There's nothing wrong with pointy in general.)
2) You want the colours to look very nice on the background, this is like haveing a poodle together with a tiger; They don't match, look akward together and it's something that's VERY DANGEROUS to do! The dog will probably get eaten..
3) DO NOT BLUR TEXT!