Post your raps or give me feedback on mine

Discussion in 'Music' started by Myridion, Jan 27, 2010.

Post your raps or give me feedback on mine
  1. Unread #1 - Jan 27, 2010 at 8:11 AM
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    I just made this last night in about 45 minutes. Feel free to use anything.
    It's more of a hard flow w/o a chorus

    Yeah mr. i'm so fly
    waitin' till the hoes try my;
    want it, i got it; crisp like gotti, decked nickel nine
    can't even touch mine

    Huh- birds flockin’ to me
    I make ‘em go down like muhammad ali
    Nigga your bitch gon’ ride me like the polar express
    Send ‘er on the way, n’ ups her ass -- double check that address

    I move with a swagga, crooked ass smile bandana
    pockets deep - gleamin’ ice, rhymes just getting’ granda
    Run up on me nigga I got three in the coupe
    Still dre motha fucka? Your ass ain’t even snoop

    Gimme a beat nigga all I need is a rhyme
    When the fuck a nigga get shot they ever call it a crime
    I’ll have you six feet deep ain’t even usin’ a n9ne
    Some call it straight thuggin’ I call it droppin’ a line

    Shit whatever the case nigga you’ll drop from the sky
    I’ll be livin’ life high, won’t even see me fly by
    You worry bout yo girl, buick, beemer n’ ya Bentley
    Nigga when you gone shit don’t nothin’ matta- nigga I’ll cry as I laugh as you die off gently
     
  3. Unread #2 - Mar 24, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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    that shit was lame b....but its also hard to feel some1s flow w/o hearin them.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Mar 27, 2010 at 1:20 AM
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    Sick shit.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Mar 27, 2010 at 10:57 PM
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  9. Unread #5 - Mar 28, 2010 at 6:07 PM
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    Myridion, you're a piece of shit
    Trying to rap, but you fail at it!
    I'll give you a chance to battle me now
    so, give it a try you fucking craow! (crow) hihi
     
  11. Unread #6 - Mar 30, 2010 at 7:21 PM
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    nice!!
     
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