Cheking my Graphic-Making- ability/// Rate please

[Render]

Hey there guys! im new to Sythe and i wanna check my GFX ability... could you please rate? well... here is my last work...
ill be adding more

Title: Over The Rainbow
Author: Render (me xD)
GFX Tipe: Signature
GFX Style: Color Playing

Title: Render Official Sig
Author: Render
GFX Tipe: Signature
GFX Style: Pop-OUT

 

[Nory]

The font on all of them is bad.

 

[Pshynosis]

The font on all of them is bad.

The font is allright, It just should be blended better...

Also pop out sigs hardly ever look good...

 

[Haunted]

Actually the fonts are to messy and choppy.
I agree on the popout part though.

 

[Render]

ok... ill improve the fonts then...
TY
for suggestions... keep posting!

 

[1337_Haze]

The fonts don't really do it for me, they don't seem to flow well with the rest of the sigs.

Also, with the pop out one, don't cut the top half off because it makes it look weird...

 

[World Domination]

Work on your text, and if you're going to make a pop out sig, pick a good render and spend time on making the pop out part of it look good. For instance, instead of the blur/glow of the render, a slight drop shadow with a possible small glow effect would look nice.
You're not too bad, keep up the good work.