My new signature

I'd like your feedback on it, please!

Not sure wether I'd execute all of it, but I am willing to improve what I know
Thanks alot guys

 

It's quit nice. The falcon is nice as a focal.

Only thing I can say is that the white around it is quite distracting.

 

it looks pretty good but the only thing id say is, the falcon/eagle covers up to much of the k

 

Or the falcon itself, every time I glance at it, my eyes rest directly on it.

I really like the signature though, it has a nice free tone to it. Although I have to agree with Stui that the falcon does cover up the K quite abit, but you'll still know what letter it is.

 

I like it although the letter N could of had been beautifuller

 

That's a very nice signature It has a nice colour scheme and images on it. There is one thing though, I'm not sure if it's meant to be there or not, but here:



It has a bullet point, and then a dash.

 

Falcon would look better on top of Kin rather than covering the K but it looks good.

 

@people saying the falcon isn't good where it is.

It establishes foreground, which adds to the depth of the piece.

 

No it doesn't because all of the brushings around it ruin that feel and make it feel flt.

The piece looks really flat in my opinion, and that coupled with the fact that it is nearly unreadable because of all of the whored elements. Everything is competing for attention and the falcon wins out because it is large. Also, the colors in my opinion are rather boring and muted. It just doesn't pop and say 'Look at this!'. I think you should start over with the text and use other elements, because the ones that you have right now just don't work together.

 

It looks great as a piece of graphic work by itself, but I don't think it functions very well as a signature. Like others have said, my eyes are immediately drawn to the falcon, while the text acts as just a background image. Your username should stand out the most. It nicely demonstrates your skills, but does not serve its purpose in the best possible way. Also, I think "best graphics artist" sounds a bit arrogant.

EDIT: Sorry, didn't realize that "best graphics artist" was the name of the award you won lmao. Disregard that comment.

 

Do not blame me! That was what I got entitled when I won that award haha.
Oh, its not a falcon haha, its an owl! But whatever the case, the main idea was to show some of the things I could come up with, if I wanted to advertise my name I would've put kinaesthic instead of "Kin".
The main idea was to have it based around a nature-ish atmosphere, I really felt like incorporating an animal so that is what I have done.
The owl is so big because I wanted it to stand out, I wanted something different, I found the owl way more interesting as a focal instead of having my full name there.

Hope this clears some things up!

 

I like the way you put the falcon is, looks good overall tbh, good job!

 

I still think that the falcon/owl should be behind the text, and, most importantly, you should move it off of the third mark so the focus remains on the text, not the falcon. While it would look great as a background piece that arches over the rest, the way you have it now distracts from the main point. At the very least you should have it face the opposite direction.

 

I do love this one, although I'd like to see some variation in your work in terms of the effects, textures and overall colour scheme. Most of them have a sort of muted orange/yellow theme like everything is decaying or old. And you keep using the same fire effect which is a little overdone now. Try to throw some life (and colour) into them - I'd really like to see how they turn out. Also watch the quality of the edges for the transparent elements such as the leaves and white splotches behind the text on the right hand side. They seem to be a little jagged in some areas. The lines coming out of the eagle kind of work well, but could probably be tidied up a little bit. Font choice for the part below seems too narrow and tall. Hoping you don't take these comments the wrong way, I'd just like to see you change it up a bit more.

 

switch it up.

 

I cant find any flaws with it, more so because i'm clueless about how to make anything graphics related. IMO, its aesthetically pleasing and looks great. I love the nature aspect.

 

eh your last one was better

 

I like it honestly, the very bright shine makes it look good. But honestly the falcon isn't really necessary.

 

I like it but as spraynwipe said, all of them are starting to look the same. A lot of people on sythe have signatures similar to yours and it just makes you blend in IMO. Its a really really good piece though, id just like to see different styles.

 

Everyone doesn't know what they are complaining about. Most people think it is the falcon, but it is actually the blinding bright white lights next to the falcon that draws your attention. Fix that and I would give this some cnc.