my song i just recorded come listen

kinda old school flavor made it in like 20 min see if you like it, its okay to hate i can handle it but you need to have something to show me of yours if your gonna get real mean hah.

http://www.soundclick.com/justinstorm

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijzCzVLPqFM - my freestyle.

Yours was alright, Sounds like you tried to hard.
Not bad though. Try freestyling and not writing.

 

you could use some flow work if thats you, and if thats you you shouldnt be fake, your not shooting people and then getting on sythe. Also some lyrical work, you should only freestyle over beats and put them out as a real song if you can be lyrical too and make sense.

edited: came a lil softer at you cause im not sure if you were trying to hate

 

it is me and i could post a comment on your page if you want me to.
i'm on sythe to make money.

You're real? you shoot rockets in your closet. What the fuck?
you faker then me. You've never walked in my shoes, you don't know who i am. i've never shot anyone but i've gotten ab with a deadly weapon on my record for kicking a kid in the head with timbs on. You could really use some lyricsism and not just jibber jabber like, " Just trying to have fun not trying to be in trouble" You are a pussy eh?

 

i said i got shoe boxes in my closet im fly like houston rockets. its a metaphor man. thanks for the feedback tho. Life dosent consist of kicking people in the head with your "timbs" if i say im not TRYING to get in trouble dosent mean i always wont but i dont seek out trouble. You talk about killing people and shooting people but you blatantly admit you never have so why do you speak on it? Also if you are on sythe for money why in your music do you say you have millions of dollars? All im about is lyrics... you talk about shooting people and getting money but then you say you dont shoot people and you dont have any money thats why your on sythe.. I hate fake gangster kids like yourself.. wow.

 

CCCC-COMBO BREAKER!

Quite your bitchin though really, everything rap usually talks about is fake. I make raps sometimes when I am bored all mine talks about is gettin chicks and shit and I am still a virgin. Its just for fun, stop trying to fight about who is "truer" than the other. You guys look like jackasses, and you guys sound like the black metal guys back in the early nineties, they had to be truer than the other person so they started burning down churches. Just quite your bitchin at each other, make your raps, be happy.

neschn out.

 

cool beans