Rap battle anyone?

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Rap battle anyone?
  1. Unread #1 - Aug 16, 2009 at 12:57 AM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Just for fun. Need to practice. Anyone up for it? =]

    Post and once we have agreed upon when we start or what lyrics to use well begin.
     
  3. Unread #2 - Aug 16, 2009 at 10:30 AM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Post some lines and I'm down.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Aug 16, 2009 at 1:55 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Alright let me start of this lyrical game
    Let me put this anit-noob in shame
    Anti, bro Ive seen your raps
    sounds like a rappers relapse


    YOUR RHYMES SOUNDS LIKE ITS COMING FROM A WANNA BE
    PUTTING TOGETHER SOME LINES AND WORDS THATS ALL I SEE
    ANYONE CAN MAKE FUN OF RACES BUT INSTEAD WE DO IT TO FACES
    FACES LIKE YOURS THAT TRY TOO HARD
    But in the end ,they end up scarred
    End up looking like a retard
    Getting stepped on with disregard

    Maybe you should try something new
    Something that fits you
    How about a punk singer
    Then you can linger
    Sing a few racist things
    And see what that brings

    Man youre a damn comedian
    By bringing runescape in
    What are you thinking?

    I wonder if you were dropped as a baby
    Hmm is that a maybe?
    Or was you mother smokin and drinkin before you were born?
    Was you Father too busy watching porn?

    No wonder you cant make sense
    I guess you can use that a your defense
    I wouldnt blame you actually
    Since you had a fucked up family in reality
    Without hospitality
    Or morality
    or mentality
    to understand their abnormalities
    ----
    In a hurry, hope you can come up soemthing to get me into it=]
    Ill be back in the afternoon
     
  7. Unread #4 - Aug 16, 2009 at 5:36 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    i really fail to see how this guys a wannabe
    your the one who asked practice to become an MC
    i can tell these bars musta as u said been put together in a rush
    kick back ima use the talent u lack to show u to do it, so hush
    talkin about runescape in your words already its absurd
    you like the penguin to these forums dont fit in with us regular birds
    i know ur a runescape nerd so leme put this how you can comprehend
    you dont have the level requirment to be fucking with this friend
    going on about "go try something that will fit you"
    go try a size small condom, not like no woman ever gonna hit you
    while u sat at home watching all ya gay porn fudge packing
    i got a while pile a condoms unstackin
    tell u right off the bat that it isnt from posh jackin
    to put it like eminem thats from me and ya mam fackin
    step back sit down go get packin
    dont take a genius to show u musical talent u lackin
    stay outa the rap section really shouldnt get meddalin
    hop back on the bike, get the fuck out here peddalin
    thinkin you so hardcore u an addict but scapes your only heorin
    i got bars so fresh n new they need wearin in
    yer his dad was busy watchin porn sat back in his recliner
    but unlike you atleast he gets hard at women rubbin there vagina
    drop me a pound and ima provide the wicked punch liner
    i may act a lil young but guess what m8 im a real old timer
    talkin abuot this diss regard n blacks tryna pull the race card
    you so hardcore for 25 years u been livin behind a door thats barred
    haha i bet being fuckin analy raped left ya mentally scared
    now i aint tryna say im any better than
    any one in the struggle but yer i am a veteran
    always looking out for the new up n comin
    but ill tell u what u aint one of em so get runnin
     
  9. Unread #5 - Aug 16, 2009 at 11:59 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    That was a fail dude. I mention Noobs fail when he used runescape in his rap,
    I didnt use it to rap but point out something. You manipulated too many words making it dull. I laughed at how you put runescape in and mentions of the game..
    Better luck next time?

    Look here skinny dick
    Dont mean to be a prick
    But I gotta say you fail at rhymes
    Stop wastin my time.
    Go to the doc and Get yourself checked out
    Cuz if you thinks this is what raps all about
    Youre crazy, no doubt

    Your shit was no more than a bad attempt
    Filled with bullshit words and contempt
    Level requirement? Fuck youre a nerd
    I barely mention the title and how its absurd
    I asked for a battle to improve
    Not that Im bad but just need to disprove
    Some of you faggots that manipulate words
    To make it rhyme when it is heard

    But in the end you look like a fool on your own
    Bitch watch your tone
    You sound like your mom when you moan
    Ill give you some weed to get blown
    Maybe that shit will stop that groanin

    HAHA

    bringing up a sell-out rapper?
    No better than a kidnapper
    You aint no veteran,
    with those pussy ass words no better than
    The words from the seuss
    bitch dont pist me off Ill get lose

    Ive made lyrics that were sick
    Unlike you, skinny dick
    You better come up with something quick
    Better not be some of that weak as shit
    Or that ll be it

    In the end you took my first rhyme up the ass
    When im just trying to pass
    and create something that will pump him up
    To create something real, fuck
    To make a real battle that would last
    Something we can look at later that past
     
  11. Unread #6 - Aug 17, 2009 at 6:39 AM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    you are both good

    i really enjoyed reading

    but gtdark is a bit better than skinny man :D
     
  13. Unread #7 - Aug 17, 2009 at 7:11 AM
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    How come i cant read thru one set of bars without hearin abuot my mother
    *sigh* not like ive herd that before you faggot go and try another
    I dont really give a fuck about your opinion, im above ya
    Im only gettin hate votes cos Bambino here loves ya
    Everything was so basic you didnt have a single celver punch lines?
    now u gonna tell me shit like "u aint even worth mine"
    fuckin hilarious to me watchin the faggots try drop then they gone
    when it came to an open mic ud look up and say how do i turn this thing on?
    so back the fuck up n sit down u know im really the only one
    your a guru with 1.2k post count and im the nerd around here?
    damn you msust be tapped, stand back and stear clear
    talkin big at me like ima fuckin run away in fear
    come around where i live you fucking bee seen near
    a peice of advice from is fucking dissapear
    save the cops the trouble of usin dental records to ID ya
    cos nobody apart from fuckin bambina really wants to see ya
    read through what ya wrote again half of it didnt actually make sense
    im doin it for ur good not my own defence, so hence
    why u shud kick back take a seat in the fence cos ya brains so dence
    leme show u how to drop bars with an amount of great immence
    makin a difficult descission wether to drop shit with prescission
    u lack talent but u got ambition, but that aint gonna stop me from dissin
    so just listen maybe yo kind find some infomation u been missin
    ive alot of bad words, has ur mom givn you permission?
    you maybe zuess but i still got praise the gods of mt. olympous
    but im still moving allways on the low, move slow like crouchin ninjas
    you bossin people n all that shit with sacraficing infants
    im busy hackin into goverment files for satelittle postions
    so evacuate sythe like its fuckin afganistan
    cos my bars are movin faster than ya fucking camels can
     
  15. Unread #8 - Aug 17, 2009 at 10:53 AM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    This rap battle is going down hill it needs to be lifted.
    Seems that these two freestyler's are mentally gifted.
    Your supposed to right 16 lines y'all thirty.
    Too bad they all sucked ass, Yea you heard me!
    Get those dick's outa your mouths and learn to rhyme right.
    Other wise your never gonna be up here in the lime light.
    My rhymes are perscribed bitches there clinical!
    You faggots are on the bottom and I'm at the Pinnacle!

    You guys need lessons in rap, Find someone to teach it.
    Better yet let me smite you down then I can preach it.
    I'm off the leash now man, I'm spilling it.
    Here in a few seconds your gonna be filling it.
    Read this once again if you think my bars are racist and nerdy...
    I guess you was just talking smack...You never heard me.
    So watch yourself when your talking smack.
    You never know when this mother fucker is gonna fire back.
     
  17. Unread #9 - Aug 17, 2009 at 6:27 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Haha alright Ill follow the bar rules. I got to say you guys are alright.
    Thanks for entertaining; I found two that are worth it. =]

    I may have 1.2k post but average it out
    Ive been here since '07 in and out
    I have about 1.4 post a day
    Just posting a few things, Just to say
    Just to say what I think
    By creating links
    At least I use better words
    That dont sound absurd

    Noob I like your style
    But please take a while
    Cuz you rhymes a redundant
    Cmon man these words are abundant
    Love the links between the words; hell i love the metaphors
    But you use em too much theyre going to run out the doors
    Go out think a while theres more to explore
    Maybe then when you come back the stage will be yours
     
  19. Unread #10 - Aug 18, 2009 at 5:14 AM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    You come in here trying to steal the spotlight
    And you present that weak shit, man that's not right
    I'm ripping up your rhymes, packing them tight with thermite
    And blowing your shit away like a fucking pidgeon in a cockfight
    C'mon man, chill out, don't be so uptight
    Get outside, get a girl, and maybe get some sunlight
    Instead of sitting on your computer, fucking pecking at your typewrite
    Like "Hey baby you got a webcam? Let's cam alright?"

    I don't even rap man, I'm just fucking bored
    So do us all a favor, take a look at your keyboard
    Locate the Alt Key, then press F4
    Navigate away from this page, go back to your YouPorn
    Don't take it out on us because you were ignored
    As a child, eating your Ramen 'cause that's all you could afford
    I'll fucking string you up on an extension cord
    Plug it in on both ends and light you up like a Christmas Tree, whore.



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    My first attempt at this ever..so yea it's pretty bad. Just wanted to give it a shot after seeing Rabs and them go at it >_>
     
  21. Unread #11 - Aug 18, 2009 at 5:24 AM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Hey, nice man!

    Just one thing -look to find words that go better together.

    E.g. cord and whore.

    The ending of you're rap should have power behinde it!

    If you want me to go in depth, then add me on msn.

    Cheers and keep it up!
     
  23. Unread #12 - Aug 18, 2009 at 5:29 AM
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  25. Unread #13 - Aug 18, 2009 at 11:53 AM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Yeah we're all unique we all got diffrences.
    Except I drop bombs and you write 4 word sentences.
    I aint hating on ya son but we are competing.
    That's why I'm feeding you words that your eating.
    No need to hold back or keep it on the low down.
    Lets get this battle going man lets throw down!

    I murder clowns like you with a hatchet.
    So demented I should be in a straight jacket.
    Gotta lot of screws loose wheres my ratchet?
    Stay around long enough and you'll be in a casket.
    Being in this minds so crazy you couldn't hack it.
    Sure I talk a lot of shit but I back it!
     
  27. Unread #14 - Aug 18, 2009 at 12:39 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    All nice raps. Haven't tried rapping in awhile myself but I was decent on this site called www.letsbeef.com. add my msn, should be in the sig.
     
  29. Unread #15 - Aug 18, 2009 at 4:01 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Ehh, I tried to reply to that and failed.

    I suck at rapping, was just bored. Good game sir :p haha.
     
  31. Unread #16 - Aug 18, 2009 at 4:07 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Yo, Check it ....

    Im a guru if you havent noticed, newfag till i die so worship
    I wont talk about bitches and hoes cause i get none
    but what i do get you can watch and cum
    I would rip you but i cant put the pieces back,
    If you crazy let me see the stray jack?
    cause all i see now is a kid that jacks his meat for loose change
    I am next in line so bow down and beg for mercy
    I raise so much hell they call me the blackest satan
     
  33. Unread #17 - Aug 18, 2009 at 4:58 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    not that i could do much better, but that was complete garbage
     
  35. Unread #18 - Aug 18, 2009 at 5:02 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    uhh if you havent notice i dont rap in any shape or form im just funny period. gah! gtfo my computer
     
  37. Unread #19 - Aug 18, 2009 at 7:54 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Gtdark you raped em both.us :)
     
  39. Unread #20 - Aug 18, 2009 at 10:20 PM
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    Rap battle anyone?

    Wtf was that grafix lmao.
     
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