Prince of Persia

Suggestions (Apart from the text, all my fonts are stuffed up and doesn't work), rate and comment.
NO RIPPING.
If you need proof I did this, I will post.

 

I find it hard to see what you see in it. You have a bad render placement, the colors don't blend at all and the lighting source is on the wrong side. You need to work on text, and techniques. Oh and not to mention, EFFECTS .