Site Sig, what do you guys think?

Hey, here is my kinda basic sig, just wondering what people think?



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If you vote, please tell me why you voted that way.

Thanks.

EDIT: Added a new one. I dunno if i tried harder or not lol, just messing around again. It's still basic, I know.

 

Take out the rectangle that is separated from the rest of the sig. Add more depth. There's also too much empty space on the right side.

pop out signatures are so 2007 xd

 

The effects around the render aren't good, they don't go with any type of sig well.

Btw Rigged, nice sprite.

 

It's pretty good but the text doesn't fit in at all, the white glow doesn't fit in with the darkness of the sig and the font is very annoying to read.

 

Like everyone said before me it needs more depth and flow it lacks alot when it comes to the blending aspect of art. Maybe work with some brushes and learn to use your tools to the fullest extent.
Also work on your text Its definitely not matching

 

And too many people use that same character.

 

Wow, wasn't expecting so much feedback lol.
But thanks, everything that you guys have said,
I've noticed for myself, so thanks everyone
and next time I'll try harder

I'll be making a new one soon.

 

I like the sig seriously verry nice how assian comes out of top and bottom of sig... ONly thing is the text... U can do so much better with it Other wise awesome ad