Lovers.. (Sad Love Poem)

Boy: Baby we need to talk.
Girl: Ricardo, what do you mean?
Boy: Something has come up...
Girl: What? Whats wrong? Is it bad?
Boy: I don't want to hurt you baby.
Girl: *Thinks* Omg I hope he doesnt break up with me... I love him so much.
Boy: Baby are you there?
Girl: Yeah I'm here what is so important?
Boy: I'm not sure if I should say.
Girl: Well, you already brought it up, so please tell me.
Boy: I'm leaving...
Girl: Baby what are you talking about? I don't want you to leave me, I love you!
Boy: Not like that, I mean I'm moving far away.
Girl: Why? All of your family lives over here.
Boy: Well my father is sending me away to a boarding school far away.
Girl: I can't believe this.

[Father: (Picks up the other phone, interrups & yells furiously) Angely, what did I tell you about talking to boys?!!! Get off the damn phone!!! (And hangs up)]

Boy: Wow, your father sounds really mad.
Girl: You know how he gets mad, but anyway I don't want you to go.
Boy: Would you run away with me?
Girl: Baby you know I would, I would do anything for you, but I can't...
You don't know what would happen if I did, my dad would kill me!!!
Boy: *Sad* Its okay I understand I guess.
Girl: *Thinking* I can't believe whats going on.
Boy: I need to give you something tonight, because I'm leaving on flight 1-80 in the morning, so I need to see you.
Girl: Okay I will sneak out and meet you at the park.
Boy: Okay I meet you there in 20 minutes.

[They meet at a nearby park, they both hug each other. And he gives her a note.]

Boy: This is for you, I have to go.
Girl: *tear* (Begins to cry)
Boy: Baby don't cry, you know I love you. But I have to go!
Girl: Okay (Begins to walk away)

[They both go back home. And Angely begins to read the letter he gave her]

It says:

Angely, you probably already know that I'm leaving, I knew this would be better if I wrote a letter to you.

The truth about how much I care about you. The truth is that I never loved you, I hated you so much, you are a bitch & Don't you ever forget that. I never cared about you, and never wanted to talk to you.
You really have no clue how much I hate you. Now that I'm leaving I thought you should know that I hate you bitch. You never did the right thing, I didn't think I could hate someone as much as I hate you. And I never want to see you, for the rest of my life, I will never miss kissing you like before.
I will not miss you and thats a promise. You never had my love, and I want you to remember that.
Bitch you keep this letter because this may be the last thing you have from me. Fuck, I hate you so much. I will not talk to you soon bitch.
Good bye,
-Ricardo.

[Angely begins to cry she throws the paper in the garbage & Cries for hours.]

A day passes, she is sad, depressed and she feels so lonely, then she gets a phone call.

Friend: How are you feeling?
Girl: I just can't believe this happend I thought he loved me.
Friend: o, about that. Ricardo left me a message, a few days ago.
He told me to tell you to look in your jacket pocket or something...
Girl: Umm okay.

[She finds a piece of paper in the jacket.]

It says:

Baby I hope you find this before you read my letter. I knew your dad might read it, so I switched a few words...

Hate = Love
Never = Always
Bitch = Baby
Will not = Will

I hope you didnt take that seriously because I love you with all my heart, and it was so hard to let you go thats why I wanted you to run away with me.
-Ricardo]

Girl: Omg.. its a letter, Ricardo does love me!!
He must of slipped it into my pocket when he hugged me. I can't believe how stupid I am!!
Friend: Lol, okay but I g2g, call me later...
Girl: *Happy* Okay bye, I will be at home waiting for my baby to call me!!

Angely turns the TV on..

[Breaking news] "An airplane has crashed. Over 47 young boys died, we are still searching for survivors. This is a tragedy we will never forget, this plane was flight 1-80. It was on its way to an all boys boarding school." Reporter says.

[She turns off the TV, 3 days later she kills herself, because of the fact that Ricardo was dead and she had nothing to live for]

A day after that the phone rings, nobody answers. It was Ricardo, he called to leave a message.
Its Ricardo, I guess your not home so, I called to let you know that I'm alive, I missed my flight...
Becase I had to see you one last time. So I hope your not worried. I am staying for good. Sorry if you got scared, I promise to make it up to you, everything will be okay, I love you so much, call me bye!

[He eventually finds out what happend, and also kills himself..]



PS: This poem is from here -->
http://www.poetbay.com/viewText.php?textId=50749

 

if you wrote it I was about to write a proper comment, but why the hell did you just paste that here.

 

Wow thats deep, deep in the hole of shit.

 

That really got to me, I read the first paragraph, Then stopped.

 

I stooped to a new level of low by reading the whole thing. Completely and utterly stupid.

 

I didn't read it, as it's not poetry.. it's more of a script.

 

Why all the flaming?

 

Its really nice, thanks for it. Vouched!

 

Omfg you have no idea what vouching means, retards like you annoy me.

Is that even a poem anyway? Kind've expected the ending the whole way through, bit like Romeo and Juliet. He killed himself because he thought she was dead but then she was alive and she found out he killed himself so she killed herself. - BORING.

 

It's not boring at all.

 

maybe ill just go and buy Readers Digest?

 

OMG..well, it's a sad story..but kinda joke... why the girl didn't check out whether the boy is really dead?

 

Stupid plot..Sorry just improve on writing a good poem. May be read some Shakespear skills.

 

Go grab a pack of Poems for Dummies and read it till you could memorize the whole book. You call that a poem? Pfft.

 

It's not a poem, dumb man.

The name of the story is a sad poem.

 

Look at the title of your post for a rebuttle to the quoted statement.

 

Ye I know, title is "Lovers.. (Sad Love Poem)"

That's the name of the story.

 

damn i sent that to my girlfriend and she cried

 

wow, you guys are telling him off but you haven't typed anything from urselves.. wow nice.
EVERYONE is unique and has a different way in writing poetry. I would think this would be nicer if you called it lyrical writing, rather than poetry, but yah its pretty good. Not my style of choice but its alright! Keep it up bro.

 

I don't get the point of this at all ??