Banner for my friends server...thoughts?

[A Speaker]

i thought it was a little cluttered but idk

thoughts please

ORRRR

finally

 

[Meeder1]

I understand its suppose to be a banner, but slapping the text on like that, and choosing such a tacky font is bad.

Also, the little turmoil icons dont look very good either.

 

[ezkNYNE]

Change up the color scheme & text, it's seemingly unprofessional.

 

[Bleik]

The text has nothing to do with the whole theme in my opinion.The colors either.Moreover, try resizing it and making it a bit smaller.Working in big art is always tougher than working in small art.

 

[L E G A C Y]

The font is horrible.
Make it more legible.

 

[Nux]

I think it has to much colour into it. But less colour.

 

[Kinaesthic]

Has too much colour, looks very low quality, font looks unproffesional, icons are way too small for the text itself, you barely see them.
Make a new one, totally, from scratch and make it less-big size, or just focus a part of it on the text.

 

[Laimtrinds]

theres no originality in these pictures