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Bad... but hey.

Alteranz

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Shit, but hey... CnC please.
I have two versions, because I wanted to keep in mind the problems that I had with my LAST post here where because of the nature of people's screen brightness, noone could see the detail. I'll let you decide which looks best...

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Personally, I like the second one. The light seems a bit better on that one.
But this is almost the exact same theme/color/style as the butterfly one in your sig. :(
Text is good (same as last one), but I don't like that text on the top.
I like the stars around him. I don't really know anything bad about it besides removing the text at the top. Oh and the bottom right just seems a bit fuzzy/uneven or something, maybe sharpening that part may help.
Nice job, again.
 
I don't think this is bad, i think you've done a nice job here.

My attention is drawn towards the second one though, for good reasons ;]
 
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Lord.... where's the respected members when I need some help? Have you gone to some other magical GFX forum?
If you have, in all seriousness, PM me it. I would prefer going to a forum based purely upon Graphics for this kinda help, rather than a section on a Cheating website....
 
Lord.... where's the respected members when I need some help? Have you gone to some other magical GFX forum?
If you have, in all seriousness, PM me it. I would prefer going to a forum based purely upon Graphics for this kinda help, rather than a section on a Cheating website....

Well...may I suggest gfxvoid to you?

I've been there, it's helped me out plenty with many great tutorials, and yes it is a forum with plenty of great sections (tutorials, sigs etc.)
 
Am not liking the text overlay on the stock/render.

Try to make focal 66% across rather than 50% (rule of thirds) or anything nearer that.

Composition could be better, effects etc.

The space stock is really low quality, try use a sharper crisper one.

Good job though :)
 
Lord.... where's the respected members when I need some help? Have you gone to some other magical GFX forum?
If you have, in all seriousness, PM me it. I would prefer going to a forum based purely upon Graphics for this kinda help, rather than a section on a Cheating website....

Huh? I thought I posted this.


'Respected Members'
Did my post not help you at all?
 
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