high typing lmao.

I awoke in a dream from sippin on this lean, poppin promethazine and then hittin the scene. my mind stays up like im filled with helium, smokin on this sticky green shit tryna get a million, dolla by dolla i try flippin o's to pounds tryna stay on the down, when the cops see me they frown cuz im 20 and fly, and a mothafuckin white guy with a pocket fulla billz and a sack full of pills on my way to bankin mills, gridin these streets and if you come at me ill sever your teeth.

 

Not bad, could of done with a bit better structure to make it flow easier.

7/10

 

5/10, its was alright.

 

6/10 work on ur flow or u should seperate ur bars with a space or a /

 

5/10, it was ok for just going with it when you were high, but the lyrics weren't that great i mean "sever your teeth"? why not "shatter your teeth"