any good?

about some girl
well its slow and fingerpicked

You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
You are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

The first day I met you I was captivated,
from your very look, to your very sound,
when you first kissed me, I was sent to heaven,
I knew my life had just begun

You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
You are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

Do you remember, that night together,
hudled close, I could feel your every breath,
And when you told me, just how much you loved me,
I just wished that night would never end

You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
You are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

And I need you here by me,
and I need you to see, just how much you mean to me,
Now before you go, just give me one chance,
so I can be the man you need me to be

Because, you are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
You are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

Yea, you are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams...

so what do you think?

 

Its quite good

 

wow funny story I bring all my lyrics to school because thats where I get the majority of them done and I open up my songs folder and nothing so I get to
next period and they are all there and the girl I wrote this for was walking out of the class and the only song missing was this one... Haha idk if I'm mad at her or not

 

Its good, not my type of music but still good.

 

Its pretty good
so when are you going to sing it to her

 

yea im not going to

 

Nice =]

 

It isn't bad, not the subject of poetry im interested in the most, but it still isn't too bad