A new tag...

First in a while.. Spent a piss long time fixing up minute things and getting the lighting and tones looking right.



New:

 

I love the effects, but the colors aren't really that great in my opinion. It makes the lighting appear too strong and it needs some depth.

 

Haha just had a break for an hour or so and came back and totally see what you mean. Staring at the screen 3 hours straight while making this kind of warped my perception of the final piece at the time. Will fix up those colours tomorrow.

 

tut tut why is that circle on a powerpoint so distracting.

also render looks LQ.

more depth

 

For some reason the burn on the render's eye bothers me :S

 

I don't think that is a burn... I think that is make up in the render.

 

That's what I mean, not like the burn tool, like the burn in the render

 

It's makeup or something on her.

Updated first post with new version.

 

sick i love it

 

first one is better

 

yeah, should have put a square into excel

 

I see what you've done and it's good, with the matching shapes and stylistic aspect of it, but the dress is too sharp, the composition looks largely unfinished, and whilst I like the colour scheme in the second more, it still needs a large amount of changes and additions

 

I like the color scheme in the second a lot better, but I feel as if something is missing in the piece, possibly in the top right corner or maybe just somewhere in general.