Anime Tag

Kinda like this one, and as usual- CnC plox and text ftl.
If someone has a good text tutorial, please let me know :3

 

The text is definitely easy on the eyes, but its too easy. I actually had to look for the text ;3

But, im not well known in the graphics community. Or the community to begin with. Just my 2¢'s.

 

This is not your best :/ The text is almost unnoticeable and the focal is in the middle of the tag instead of on the left. It also looks very LQ.

4/10 sorry.

 

The focal was supposed to be her face :Z


Edit: Some touch-ups -> Kinda messed up the blurring of W000T's focal as I applied the image a bunch of time before :\



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Thats what i men't by the left i just got mixed up XD. My bad. It looks better but its still not that great :/

 

OK, thanks. I like the render, so I might try it again later

 

Try working on your depth and composition. You can't really make a tag black and white to avoid color problems because black and white means you need to have good depth to give the eyes something to make the focal stand out. The text isn't very good, the placement is awful and the tag is a chaotic mess really.

 

I don't like the face on both sides of the picture, kind of draws your eye to both sides and there isn't a main focus then. Besides that I like the picture.