Another attempt at rebranding

[Danai]

Just spent another 2 minutes (as always) attempting to rebrand (again) my web & graphics company. So far, I have come up with a very basic concept and produced it. Before we start, I'd just like to say I came up with this in maths while designing a Pythag poster.

White version for Sythe:

Blue version for website:

Changed the white version a little: (N is now cut out and text is sythe color)

I'm in the middle of designing a mascot; may take a while though, it's approaching summer and that means a bit of sun!

Feedback fully welcome

 

[T R 1 B A L]

Fix the kerning of the logotype - look how fat and close together the 'hon' looks in comparison to 'pyt', it just doesn't fit nicely.
It's also far too angular in general for the fonts you're using - look at how squarish the general shape is and how curved the little font is.
I like the concept of the logo, but it could be far more stylish, better executed and web 2.0

 

[Danai]

Thanks for your feedback!
I'll try fixing up the letter spacing
As for the font, I could round off the top left of the P and the bottom left of the N if that would do?
I'll get on it soon!

 

[sm321]

Instead of making it the Sythe colour, you could just make it transparent and save it as .PNG. As for the logo itself, I really like it. It's sort of "abstract" yet you can easily read what it says.

 

[Danai]

Thanks for the feedback!

Sorry I've been away for so long, will get more active again!

 

[Spraynwipe]

Font choice of web and graphics could be changed, and I feel the actual main text is a little too thick. It needs some more details, perhaps some 1 pixel black lines to follow the edges of the text (like in the middle of the text).