Almost Epic Sig!

it took me a while I think i'm so close to becoming really good I just need to take that final step.

Plus it wasnt the effects of sig that really took so long it was the coloring and stuff took forever.

Its mostly just all c4d filter-disort-displace and filter-disort-ocean ripple both on 10

CnC -just learned that

 

I really like it to be completely honest, one thing I think I should point out is the background could be slightly TOO dominating, the render should be the focus, but the c4d's are pretty bright and loud. But apart from that, I think overall it's an amazing sig

 

You still have quite a few faults, for one, the flow doesn't always have to be outward from the focal. Secondly, the contrast is too high, and the focal point is disrupted by this.

Colouring could be far better, as could lighting (which is really hard to define because of the high contrast).

The text needs to improve quite heavily. try variations of shaping, flow, and integration of text.

Usually clipping works well, when experimenting.

 

I can´t even see your focal clearly
text is slapped on and it does not work that well.
And why are there 2 different texts using totally different effects?
Effects look oversharpened.

 

... This is funny - i agree with the three of the ones that posted before me - and they know a lot more than me - your sig is amazing but too bright and has no focal point - But i think T R I B A L was too hard with your sig, i really like it - kinda makes me go blind

That was hard mate...

 

Since TDD isn't here to say it.
"Don't be a C4D Whore"
There are other ways to add effects.

 

was just bout to say that

if your gonna use c4d's try not to cover the render.. you want the "focal point" to be seen..