new concept for me

I used a tutorial for a guideline but mostly my weird use of effects.

c&c helpful

 

Pretty good,

I remember trying a new concept. It takes time but you get it.

 

I rather like that "new style" of yours. However, I would suggest that you add more effects(I could just be an "effects" whore though ) and I will once more suggest stronger lighting. On the very shiny and metallic parts I can see the possibility for some amazing shine and lighting effects. Good job though, I think that is probably your best from what I have seen.