True crime (smudge)

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Looks to clustered also the render just looks like its sitting there dont be scared to smudge the render a bit to give it a little depth. i give it a 5/10 decent.

 

What are you talking about, 3/4 of the render are smudged away.. Although I do agree with the cluttered space, it could have been done on a bigger canvas to a better effect.

Black rectangle puts the flow off for me, I would just get rid of it.

I'm really digging the sharp effects made by the smudged colours, although the top yellow smudge is just a little too sharp on the edges (the one near the render).