Abstract Smudge

2nd attempt at one. I think it turned out pretty well. CnC.

V1:



V2 (Squidge's Suggestions):



V3 (Squidge's Suggestions + Text):



V4 (Bigger white soft brushing inside the orbs):



V5 (No pink sphere or white circles):

 

blend in spheres. remove glow. remove border. effect c4d is shit not your fault, but you shouldn't have used it. bottom bit is annoying. nice colours though.

 

Alright, i'll fix it up and i'll post a v2. People on another forum told me to add a few things, but I'll do some other stuff and see how it looks.

 

oh and add text

 

I'm not big on text, so I'll make it really small. I updated V2 (with your suggestions) and V3 (your suggestions + text) into the first post. CnC please.

 

Where's V2?

 

In the first post.

 

keep up the good work mate

 

possibly try to add a but more colour to it?

the pink-red is yuck.

 

I disagree, he blends them in perfectly.

 

um its decent, i personal think you should do another 1 with the c4d in it but mess with the c4d's colors and try to blend them in with the other's.

 

ok awesome, much improved. You could try and implement an effect c4d. Don't put it in the blue bit, just put it so it flows with the pink smudging towards to spheres. Try and adjust the hue so its a complementary colour.

 

Lighting doesn't make sense on the pink sphere

 

^that struck me too.

Also, squidge gave some pretty epic advice, and he was right, it looks much better now, though i think the second sphere should be blended too.

 

I like mitchell. He actually uses your advice and improves instead of shrugging it off. awesome

 

I like the second outcome, although, the orbs seem a bit too dull. The soft brush on them, in my opinion, would be better if it took up more of it. They're too small.

 

Thanks for all the constructive criticism guys. Most people would just be like 'i don't like it'

KIABIN, I'll make the white soft brushing bigger, and post another version.

@Xjaa, the green isn't lighting, its just part of the original background. I had another version done without the pink orb and two white circles, so I'll also post that.

 

That's not exactly what I was imposing, and yet I like the turnout of the latest version. Better focal in my opinion.