New Sprite

I actually like the turn-out on this one.

 

Ow? What can I say except that...

Please review the "Rules of Photography."

 

It is so chaotic I can barely focus my eyes on a single spot. Your sprite is drowned out immensly. Not to mention I hate the color choice. It looks like you printed it out and left it in the rain for a week to let the colors get shitty.

Unfortunatly and obviously you have my honest oppinion.

 

Dammit, after my recent session of sucky tags, I figured I made something good... oh well....

 

looks great but im not able to read that

 

/slap

like riiped said the colors are dull..also you have too many things going on, completely removing our attention to the focal. bad choice of text.