+J (tag)

C'n'C.

 

My eyes are getting drawn to the streak of light to the left of her head. The stock is defying the flow you set with the c4d/stock:/

Not your best mate KIU

 

Like the lighting, actually, don't really like the J+, but it's a neat way of incorporating it. The "radial pattern" or whatever it might be, might look a little better at lower opacity in the center bottom, by the patch of skin [arm?].

I like it

 

It's ok, but you can improve a few things that will make it look way better

1. the streak of light mention by w000t, it draws to much attention, i agree on that

2. the dark markings on the left ( the +J ) on the sig is useless to be honest .. you could remove that, doesn't look good

3. if i look closely i see some VERY cool effects, but the entire sig is to blurry and flat, has no depth at all.. try to create more depth.

4. the render is a floating head .. why can't i see more of her body, i just see her head and shoulder, it makes it look weird ..

those are the things I'd improve on this sig, then it will look allot better, I'm sure

KIU