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Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by GFX | Justin, Sep 11, 2010.

  1. GFX | Justin

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    Criticism / Tips , please :)

    I personally don't like the text, but I'm never good with text :<

    Looking at it again, it also doesn't really have a defined flow [ithink] :z

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    I don't like the white rectangle at the right bottom and I think the character doesn't stand out enough. Otherwise, the background is nice and text isn't that bad.
     
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    The character's colors are too similar to the ones in the background, either try darkening some, or maybe adding a bit of a glow? The text doesn't even look that bad, but the box around it is a bit rough ;\ Good luck!
     
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