lyrics for a song i just made?

theses are the lyrics for the song i kinda half made:
I'll fuck em up so much they'll neva talk again talk again
i'll fuck em up so much that they'll neva walk again walk again.


i dont knew where to put this :embar:

 

u can make that the chorus?

 

ohh, so hostile in this forum

You should put more lyrics into that though, see'ing as how it's TWO LINES

 

yer needs alot of stuff there,


anybody can make up the odd good line but needs to be a consistant thing if you Ever intend on being a Recording artist.