Its a shame the text on this one covers the jeans on this one. They seem to draw attention in the first picture and i like it :love:
You should have used the text to compliment the flow, not to fuck it over. The render is over-sharpened. The smudging on the bottom looks sloppy. It's a pretty cool tag overall, though.
i honestly think this picture in whole is amazing! the only problem i have is the blur at bottom of jeans is bit well... not to blurred in with the jeans i will show what i mean (i dont mean to offend you, im just trying to help) and maybe change it to something similiar to this but yeah as i said .. other then that it is perfect for my likings <3 i realy love all your work
Don't worry about seeming like you're offending me. I take all constructive critique to mind. I see what you mean by it and thanks for the CnC. Thanks
The flow is pretty definite. But the left side distracts me from the focal completely. Maybe try using different colors as well? What I do if I feel my sig has too much contrast is make a color layer with the color 1b1b1b and set that to lighten on 100%. Changing the opacity can help as well. Oh, and sharpen sharpen sharpen.
Colours are great, maybe just a bit too contrasted but it sort of works in your favour I think. Blending and text issues around the chick, and it feels a little empty of effects on the left. Nevertheless, I think you're really getting the hang of smudging
