lol look

edit:
another fairly easy sig I made from a tut there

I learned like this super simple tag is basicly better then mine. is that so?
got this from a tut off planet render because w00t told me to go there
btw w00t those guys are harsh raters anyways
one more thing upload your other 2 I wanna see what they rate you
damnet text looks gay oh well

I feel I got a little better today thanks to you guys

 

I uploaded my other two . Too much empty space.
You don't have to follow tutorials. Sometimes they suck.

CnC:

It's a really simple tag like you have stated. Tags don't have to be complicated. I can't tell you how many of my tags took >1 hour. and have less than 40 layers.

You have to much empty space going on.

The flow looks like it should be coming from the top corners downward towards the render but instead the placement of the shards/c4d(?) just go upwards towards the top left corner.

Right now you have a centered focal which normally does not work out.

KIU<3

 

they are not harsh raters, they tell you truth brah.

and you said you dont like the text so change it or get rid of it.

composition isn't good (rule of thirds)

the focal points like, his back and that could be improved by better focal placement and not oversharpening the whole render.

fx look kinda LQ this is probably because of oversharpening.

theres flow, but its not flowing to the focal.

no depth or lighting what so ever.

needs colouring

 

kewl siggy

 

Ok I here you haha and parts of erased c4d. Ok I am bad at flow

ok. To lazy to change text because I dont care about the tag. ok thanks for the cnc

and ty