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Made it for a SOTW on a different site.. I know I'm not "good," or at least not yet so constructive criticism please.
This is my 7th tag/signature.

 

You're getting better, Try to add a light source and blend the render with other effects other than just splatter brushes. C4D's really help a lot so try to learn them. Sharpen the render a tad if you haven't all ready.

KIU!

 

Honestly it's sharpened enough as is... if anything it needs to be blurred in sections further back.

 

I was referring to the eyes as thats what needs to be more distinctive IMO

 

i really like it, render fits extremly good with the bg

 

Remove the text, or replace it.

and it would look so sweet.

Text placement etc is the hardest thing to learn and it's the difference between a signature looking amazing or not.