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Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by Kleenex, Oct 3, 2010.

  1. Kleenex

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    I'm not really proud of this one. I just didn't know what to do, and I think it shows.

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  2. ChrisCol

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    Not sure what i would rate it, but i like it.

    I didn't know you did GFX kleexex
     
  3. Kleenex

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    Thanks.

    I really don't do a lot of GFX, as this is only my second signature. I'm trying to get into it though. ^^
     
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    2/10 --

    Its empty, very very empty, Monochromatic, and 2 light sources don't work in a sig.
     
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    Yeah, I know. Thanks for the advice.
     
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    I am trying to help around here, I hope you don't take offense if I give it a low rating. I am not trying to be a douche just trying to help.
     
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    I'm not really sure what you did with those lines but there not working out.

    A lot of people think this is offensive but READ SOME TUTORIALS. There really helpful when your starting out with tags.

    Kiu tho.
     
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    I understand. No offense taken.
    Yeah, really bombed this one. I'll continue to read tutorials, thanks.
     
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    Monochromatic-
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    2 or more lightsources-
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    Please think out your critique more in the future and don't give incorrect advice.
     
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    I didn't give incorrect advice, I just said that the sig was empty, monochromatic, and that the two light sources don't work. I wasn't saying you shouldn't do it, I was saying that it doesn't look good.

    Also, if you look through all the other pieces I have critiqued you will see that I usually give a long explanation why it doesn't work. so please allow me to clear this up:

    Monochromatic makes the sig look flat normally, because there are too few colors to give a real depth of feel. Two light sources from opposite sides of the sig draw attention away from the focal and the emptiness takes away from the overall feel of the sig, the entire point of a tag is to increase the appeal of a focal point using effect, colors, and lighting sources to make the attraction to ones eye. The text could also use work, if you do want to do a monochromatic sig give something more that just a slight fog in the background, build the sig in color first and make two versions. 1 in color and 1 in black and white so we can see both outcomes.
     
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