PvP Video INTRO Tester...Feedback?

This is my FIRST project in Adobe After Effects CS5. *If you'd like a key, PM me!!*


Please, give honest feedback on it, I just want to learn to make really cool intros

Watch it in 720p HD:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RCm8AbPJdM

This is for my turmoil pure, which you can follow the progress of here:
http://sythe.org/showthread.php?t=912042

You can also subscribe to my channel for Vlogs, which I post every 2-3 days!
http://www.youtube.com/user/SmokeWeedHf

Thanks guys!!