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i really liked the stock T R 1 B A L used for his recent sig so i thaught i would have my go with it

 

In my opinion, it doesn't have much depth. Looks like you just plopped a bunch of effects on a canvas (obviously this isn't the case).

I'm not a sig maker so I can't really offer you any advice, but thats my feedback on how it looks

 

Your use of cubes and squares in signatures is over-whored - you should avoid using them at all in your work... as the random horizontal and vertical lines scattered all over the place detracts from the flow.
Whatever you have placed on top of the original stock is like a mask, and it has the same effect as a frosted glass window - you can barely see any detail.

 

I think it would really benefit with some more depth. Brightness/contrast will help you a little bit, but you should definitely try using the burn tool to darken it up and make it less washed out. Keep it up!

 

you fail, get better

 

and you think i fail?