sotw entry

I won't be changing entry but wondering what you guys think.
CnC please? Also link me to your thread and I'll CnC back
~Naughty

 

Well it looks like alot of splatter brushes but they seem to go okay together, those white dots though are eh.

 

So I should ditch the dots?

 

I feel without the dots, the render would look too small.

 

Firstly, floating head syndrome, secondly could be far more dynamic in contrast (since it's black and white, you have to make up for the absence of colour through contrast and dynamics), thirdly, composition isn't great, try blend your effects into a strong foreground/background/middleground, and create effects that accentuate focal point.

I admit the stock doesn't have amazing flow, but there's always c4ds/brushing/clipping/stocks for that.

GJ though