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How To: Make Poems that Rhyme

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  1. iLikePaper

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    How To: Make Poems that Rhyme

    Hello, this is iLikePaper from Sythe,
    where you can cheat for the rest of your life,
    so here's my guide on how to rhyme,
    without wasting so much of your time.

    So if you want to rhyme poems easily,
    without acting like a silly billy,
    then you can go on these sites from
    www.rhymezone.com to www.rhymer.com

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    Or you can go on google to find a different rhyming site,
    can't find one? don't give up without a fight.
    Just use the sites above I found on google,
    or while your at it, grab a pot of hot noodle!

    You can use this for your english homework,
    not for coursework, or you'll be acting like a jerk.
    On the website, simply type any word,
    then you will find rhymes for it, and you'll be flying like a bird!

    Thanks for reading my guide,
    reading it gave me a warm fuzzy feeling inside. :'( :p
     
  2. drewskyd

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    To be honest, I don't like this guide. It is just about going to a site...Also, it lacks a good layout. There's one picture and a few sentences with barely anything in them and no text effects... this is because you did the whole thing in a poem...lol. I would suggest instead of writing a poem as your guide (which was clever because it was a guide about poems...but) just be more informative. Also, this doesn't really help much because you could find a rhyming word that makes no sense in a poem.

    Overall poor guide. Sorry to say but just work on your layout and content.
     
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    Agreed with what drew said. It looks like you spent maybe 5 minutes on this guide, and adding a website reference.

    I would recomend redoing the guide, going into more specifics, and broaden the category to include various other aspects of creating lyrics.
     
  4. iLikePaper

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    Hmmm... yeah... I see, I'll remake the guide with a better structure and layout.
     
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    I like the concept but the guide is poorly made. You should center things, add more pictures (if you can), change bolding and colors, and other things. Also, add more details about rhyming or other things that have to do with the subject.

    Good Luck!
     
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