first in a while.

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first in a while.
  1. Unread #1 - Feb 18, 2010 at 12:41 PM
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    first in a while.

    Hadn't made anything in a while.

    Made this;

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    Below usual methinks, though i'm just relearning old techniques.
     
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    first in a while.

    I like the concept of it. It has a few flaws.

    -I think you should add more clouds to the right side to create more flow
    -I think you should also up the contrast and try some brighter colors.
    -And possibly more space stocks.

    As said, I love the concept, and you're just getting back into photoshop. As said, not your best, but it's more of a sig to get used to the tools again. Keep making more.
     
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    first in a while.

    I love the lighting and effects, also the clouds and flow, although the stock looks a little LQ to me, unless that was intentional. I love it.
     
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    first in a while.

    Ermmm I really don't know what to say... There's just something that bugs me about it. I think possibly it's a bit too long horizontally? It would likely benefit from being shorter, and more compact - The stocks closer together, and overlapping more, mainly on the left hand side.
     
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