FLow 3 (One of my best i fink) (GIFT TO BLUPIG)

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Wireframe/few c4ds too.

 

i think that the lighting is good, although i wouldn't have covered the window and i would have made it obvious that it was the light source.

my eyes are kinda attracted to the wireframe and the flow is pretty weak towards the girl.

I would move the wireframe closer to the chick and not cover the window and add text.

i dont like the fact its monotone.

 

You're a graphics mod on this site?

 

Anyone else have any CnC to give?

 

Is that some way to offend him..?


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It looks really good if you ask me.
Err don't know much to say thats bad, but maybe make it have more colors?

 

the left kinda looks empty to me. and i would make the grid more noticeable it looks too blurry.

 

My attention was kind of drawn to the shelves, i don't know why.

Other than that, Good job.

 

So hungry for praise.
First of it is a very nice final product I saw it on the day you posted it and it seems to have grown on me since.


The flow is nice, but with wireframe creates as line which draws focus away from the girl
I like what you did in the red circle I feel it is noteworthy.
Make me a gift at some point.

 

Thankyou, and yeah sure