cNc

[|D|]

First tag in about 2 months

Kinda plain, but whatever

Do your stuff, cNc.

V2

 

[squidge]

light is too intense.
you should try and gradually blur the b/g outwards from the focal instead of blurring the whole thing equally.

 

[|D|]

ok thanks, ill post v2 in a sec

 

[Krayzie-Bone]

Gonna use what squidge said as a basis.

The right side is fine now. The left side is still equally blurred. Try to make it so that the furthest-most point, from left to right, is the most visible and clearest while gradually declining in visibility until hitting the lightning. On the lightning part, I think I prefer the first one, shows more definition.

 

[T R 1 B A L]

wut squidge said.

Also the grey thing's taking far too much attention from what i guess you're trying to make the focal (the face).

 

[HumblePi]

the white line-thing seems a bit choppy, why dont you use a pen tool or something to recreate the line and add a glow?