SOTW entry.

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SOTW entry.
  1. Unread #1 - Sep 27, 2009 at 1:14 PM
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    SOTW entry.

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    I don't like the floating head.
    The effects are good on their own, they would have worked better if you could see the whole body and the splats could have blended better.
    You got the lighting just right.
    I would have liked to see the same style of effects on the other side as well, which could have worked if it wasn't for the floating head again.

    FUCKING FLOATING HEAD
     
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    I think leaving it desaturated and not making it that orangish desaturated color would make it better. The colored lines I don't think fit in this piece, as they distact me a lot from the focal. I like the concept with the splatters. It's definitely not your best, but definitely not your worst. More like a somewhat average.
     
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    I think you could of picked a better stock. Something that relates more to Music. Other than that I think it's flawless. The pentooling on the right looks amazing, spot on.
     
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